CHAPTER 2 PAGE 53

posted September 30th, 2016, 12:40 am

alice almost bit it dudes did you see the size of that rock?

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November 6th, 2016, 3:14 pm

bruisewillow

Hiatus

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Hey guys, sorry for the lack of communication, health stuff has been bad and school's been a lot, so we're officially on a bit of a hiatus :( we're most likely going to be back in a month, thank you guys so much for your understanding!

Something we both want to be really clear about is that this comic is really important to us and we're absolutely not abandoning it, I guarantee we'll be back soon! (I'm especially excited for the next chapter, we're finally going to get to show you a bit more of the setting and introduce more of the cast!!!)

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September 30th, 2016, 11:41 am

kimo (Guest)

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:OOOOO and wait what is that thing around alice's eye? like she didnt have it in the last page?? is it blood? another glitchy thing?? :OOOOO mistery mistery

(anyway this is one of my fav webcomic ur doing such a gr8t job thanks for murdering me at every update

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September 30th, 2016, 11:25 pm

oogala (Guest)

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holy heck

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October 26th, 2016, 9:14 am

rnera (Guest)

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all the characters look the same

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October 26th, 2016, 12:00 pm

rigs (Guest)

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@rnera: not really? maybe just the art style but they're all pretty different

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October 26th, 2016, 6:09 pm

rnera (Guest)

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@rigs: yeah they do, their faces are the same.
just some constructive criticism: faces often differ

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November 2nd, 2016, 8:26 pm

bamboozled (Guest)

what again

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@rnera: Alice: Round face, round eyes, pert nose, large lips Milo: button nose, thinner eyes, not as round face, smaller lips Daniel: longer face, flat/long nose, round eyes Maria: Aquiline nose, square-ish eyes, thin face. I mean I can understand what you mean, but if you look closely they have different ear shapes for heck's sake. There's sameface, and then there's having a style, I feel like ur just nitpicking.

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November 16th, 2016, 1:18 am

indé (Guest)

a real constructive critique is...

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@rnera: Its not really constructive criticism when you make a negative comment without feedback as to how to make it better or mix it in with a positive one i.e I really like the comic, but maybe you should try to distinguish some of their facial features more so they look less alike. That's a constructive critique...but also I have to agree with bamboozled and say they do have different features and the similarities are due to art style so yeaaaaah....

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November 2nd, 2016, 8:23 pm

bamboozled (Guest)

what

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@rnera: what are you? talking about????

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November 16th, 2016, 1:11 am

Indé (Guest)

wow

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This comic, is beautiful and I love the multi ethnic cast, and I am very excited to see where the story goes! Also best of wishes regarding life stuff!!

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